Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Literacy Narrative

While reading "Proficiency", I understood how she felt. She described her feelings each time she got the scores back of the test. I understand her feeling, being a smart student and getting a bad response to a standardized test. She described everything in detail.

I thought she wrote this really well. I wanted to keep reading to find out if she ever passed, and she provided vivid detail.

1 comment:

  1. Grace, remember each response should be at least two paragraphs with no less than five sentences per paragraph.

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